Reviews For A Christmas Story
aww, that was a super story....i'm glad, everything worked out for the girls....though, i was getting the feeling.....that they ended up with tony....i think, it would have been great....if they had....but, i'm soooooo glad....he was allowed to be part of their lives anyways.
thanks,
alisa
Date: 12/26/2010 20:59 [Report This]
Awesome story! I think it was a great idea that the girls didn't go with Tony, not because i don't think that it would be a bad idea, but i don't think Tony could handle it with his life style. It was more realistic. The only thing I have to say is that I think you may have messed up the girls ages going to the 7 years later part. If Nova was six and Bethany was seven, then they would eb thirteen and fourteen seven years later. I know it's not that important, but i'm kinda a perfectionist. :/ Awesome story though:D
Date: 12/30/2010 7:17 [Report This]