So far this is really good. You are showing Tony and Gibbs with the right amount of emotion. Not too stern and not too mushy. A lot of the stories either write the guys as men with little or no emotions and others make them so emotional you wouldn't know they were men. It is nice to see a slightly softer side to Gibbs, but still in character and even though Tony is obviously more emotional this is still within his character. I look forward to whatever else you have in store for them.

That was fabulous!

Thank you so much, catzj! Yeah, I wanted Tony to be a bit more emotional than usual in this story. I pictured him pretty wrung out, and then emotions tend to run raw.

Thank you so much :)

Wow! That was quite a chapter of emotion there. How long will Abby it a secret now that she knows about the boys I wonder. Thanks for updating so soon. Look forward to the next chapter.

Wonderful chapter! It figures Abby would find out on her own...although I think McGee might suspect (maybe?) Great work.