Oh, Vance is going to be in a world of hurt. Despite his and SecNav's coverup, people on the hill aren't going to be very happy with Vance that he loses the best team in the agency all in one day.

Awesome series and some truly excellent characterisation from both NCIS and the Houston Nights 'verses. Thanks for sharing. :-)

This was a really nice story! It was nice to see Gibbs happy! He needed this since a long time and Tony deserved happiness too. :3

This was a really nice story! It wa

I am SO happy to see a new chapter here. Smiles sweetly and hope for another real soon.

Oh myyy. I am enjoying this story a lot. Although I do hate the thought of poor Ziva going back to being alone and becoming hard again. I can see everyone else finding some happy situation. Please be gentle with her. eagerly awaiting the next chapter, twi

Wow! Great chapter! Excellent!!!

That was an amazing chapter! I can't wait to see where you go with this...

I loved this!

I love evil Jenny Fics! This is awesome.... You are an excellent writer

That was great! This is such a captivating story!

I'm really loving this sequel!! I'm anxious to read more.

This is just brilliant as always. Your writing is super. Thanks.

Thanks for the update,what else can i say but MORE...MORE...MORE...PLEASE.

Huh, I had forgotten about the whole Decker thing. I hope Gibbs et al get to have their pound of flesh from crazy madame director. And I keep feeling like Ziva is in on it, but that's probably me projecting & reacting to the Houston team's suspicion of her. This is a lovely chapter--the give and take of friendship, family, underscored by concern really flows wonderfully. I like seeing more evidence of what a fulfilling life and group of friends Tony has surrounding him now. I don't comment enough, but I'm so glad that you're writing this story. I've enjoyed every bit of it and am constantly guessing which way the mystery will turn. I love the relationship between Tony, Lundy and Joe not to mention the rapport with their team. It's good for Gibbs et al to see how a real supportive team works; good for Gibbs to see a competent leader who respects everyone. More than that, I really appreciate how you care for the characters and the story. When I want to read good NCIS fic it's your stories that I turn to.

clever. i love the extra insight into characters that you create for your stories. tony's file cabinets, and the quirk with his handwriting are the things that create a 3-dimensional character. Love how Nunes reacts to Gibbs being his usual demanding self. Some interesting insight into exactly how twisted Shepard has become in this chapter as well. From Tony's notes, and her continuing mess-ups, it's obvious she hasn't been playing with a full deck for quite awhile. Does Ducky know what's wrong with her in this AU like he did in canon? I can't remember. I also appreciate here and in the previous chapter how the Houston team doesn't want Ziva in the know. I like that suspicious nature, because I'm still not convinced when it comes to canon that she was ever truly to be trusted.

I'm liking this story more and more as I get into it. Like your attention to detail here. Out of ideal curiosity the names of the LaFiamma and Lundy wouldn't be a reference to the TV series Houston Knights by any chance? The thought just suddenly struck me as I was reading this chapter

Nice to get an update at long last, I was fearing the muse had left you. Liked the style of this chapter more than the last one, can't exactly explain why but found this one more solid. Hope next update will be sooner muse permitting

ksl's stories always make good reading

Glad you decided to write a sequel to your last story as I felt there were some untied ends there. I look forward to reading the rest of this story

Loved that doctor on the night shift, made me smile.:) And Tony calling Gibbs "boss" as he drifted off at the end was a nice touch. Great chapter!

Sometimes Shepard just pisses me off...she's not one of my favorite characters. Great chapter!

This story is getting so good! I loved the scene in Tony's hospital room. :)

Loved Gibbs and Ziva teaming up in interigation.:) Great chapter and can't wait for more!

Great to see another chapter. I can't wait to see if the team gets involved.