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Title: None Reviewer: Chrissie Signed

I really hope that someone can finish this story.  

Date: 05/15/2016 2:31 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: fanncis Signed
update please
Date: 11/16/2009 1:25 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: fanncis Signed
merci pour cette suite. vivement la prochaine. Que va t-il se passer une fois Tony détaché.
Date: 11/13/2009 5:26 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: fanncis Signed
wahou, c'est grand. Pauvre TOny. Moi à ça place une fois libéré, je me tire une balle dans la tête. Une suite...
Date: 11/13/2009 1:12 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: twilightseeker3 Signed
I would say you are on track and to keep going.
Date: 11/12/2009 3:52 [Report This]
Title: Acting on it Reviewer: twilightseeker3 Signed
Very nice start. I love the premiss of Vance and Gibbs as Doms. Your English might be a bit problematical but not at all unreadable. I do agree that getting someone who speaks English to beta might be helpful. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.
Date: 11/11/2009 7:04 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Careen Signed
Das ist doch mal ein verheißungsvoller Anfang ;) Vielleicht brauchst du ja nur einen Beta Reader, der deine gute Geschichte noch "glatter" macht? This is a nice start, I really love this story can't wait until I read more. Keep up the great work.
Date: 11/11/2009 21:01 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: kazel Signed
do you plan to continue or has this been abandoned?
Date: 08/10/2010 15:36 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: coral Signed
can we have some more to this plaese thank you it is geting so good
Date: 11/24/2009 23:14 [Report This]
Title: Acting on it Reviewer: Kateri Signed
Nice starter, very hot and kinky. Your english is not too bad, just a few errors here and there. You might want to consider getting an english speaker to read over the chapters before you post to catch the little things. Still a great story though, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11/11/2009 1:31 [Report This]
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