I really like, the only problem is that at the beginning, Adriana uses words like Cara, brava for Tony which are feminine adjectives. Except for that, really good story.

OMG, this was brilliant!!! *hugs you* I loved it, absolutely and totally!

Yes. Yes, yes, yes. This, right here, is a diamond amongst gravel. Wonderfully paced, you've got the voices of the characters all perfect, and the juxtaposition between the journal entries and the present tense was phenomenal. You pulled me in and wouldn't let go until the end - well done!