Reviews by FicFan
Summary: Tony DiNozzo meets his destiny when a cocky NCIS agent comes to work a case with him.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Genre: Drama, First Time
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22869 Read Count: 163863
Published: 01/15/2009 Updated: 01/18/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: FicFan Signed
This is a great beginning. I like stories that give a view of how Gibbs and Tony met. I would love to see how this continues to play out through their current case and on to when Tony comes to NCIS. It will be interesting to see what happens as they get to know more about each other and deal with each guys "baggage". Please write more soon.
Date: 05/08/2009
Slipping by Hilde Rated: R [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Secrets are revealed when going through a difficult case.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: First Time, Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58379 Read Count: 292245
Published: 02/03/2009 Updated: 04/15/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Slipping - chapter five Reviewer: FicFan Signed
So far this is really good. You are showing Tony and Gibbs with the right amount of emotion. Not too stern and not too mushy. A lot of the stories either write the guys as men with little or no emotions and others make them so emotional you wouldn't know they were men. It is nice to see a slightly softer side to Gibbs, but still in character and even though Tony is obviously more emotional this is still within his character. I look forward to whatever else you have in store for them.
Date: 02/17/2009
Long Before you by Izzy Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Tony is kidanpped,Gibbs and the team have three hours to find the guy that is sending them videos of Tony,being beaten,sending gibbs e-mails about what he did to tony.Will they find him in time or will they be to late?
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Jenny Shephard, Jimmy Palmer, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Drama, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo, McGee/Palmer
Warnings: Mpreg, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3879 Read Count: 15854
Published: 04/16/2009 Updated: 04/21/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Long Before you 2 Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Tony is my favorite and I have come to really like the Gibbs/Dinozzo pairing whether it be a deep friendship or a relationship. This story-line has a lot of potential, but you are lacking depth. You need to add more detail to make the story more full. You make it sound like Tony is just balling his eyes out. I know he is really being hurt physically and I assume some of the tears are for Gibbs being hurt and the idea he may not see him again, but I don't think Tony would cry like that. He would at least be fighting the tears. He would want to be strong for Gibbs and the team and he would not want to give his torturer the satisfaction. Tony has been attacked before and hurt before. Sure it is natural to have some reaction, but I think you need to pull it back a little. Also the timeline seems rushed -- can't tell how much time has past, but it seems really fast. Again it may help to fill in some more details. Maybe even write a scene of Tony interacting with his kidnapper. Let us see into the mind of the bad guy and get a feeling for what Tony is going through. Tony always has faith in Gibbs and counts on him, but maybe he would be worried that this time Gibbs would be too late. Plus you Tony would not just sit there and take what this guy has to dish out. He would make at least one attempt to escape. How would he do it -- How far would he get before he is re-captured -- What would the consequences be??? As I said, you have a nice premise and a good beginning, not to mention some great characters to play with, you just need to flesh it out some more. As it is right now it is hard to feel anything -- you need to pull us into the story so we feel what these characters are going through and how they feel about each other. You have the imagination working and you know how to write so Good Luck -- Hope your write more soon.
Date: 04/17/2009
A Cry for Help by ncismom Rated: R [Reviews - 42]
Summary: Tony's world is crashing around him but he doesn't believe his team can help him. He turns to someone unexpected for help, but will it be enough to save him?
Categories: Gen Characters: Timothy McGee, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Donald Mallard, Anthony DiNozzo, Abby Sciuto, Ziva David
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Drama, Character study, Angst
Pairing: None
Warnings: Dark story, Disturbing imaginery
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133551 Read Count: 404386
Published: 04/21/2009 Updated: 07/21/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: 2. Reviewer: FicFan Signed
This is a good start. I think it is cool that Tony made a connection with Gibb's Dad. I can't imagine what would make Tony do another undercover assignment for "The Director", especially behind his team's backs and most especially without telling Gibbs. I can't wait to find out the reason. Please write more soon.
Date: 04/25/2009
Title: Chapter 3: 3. Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Please write more soon. I am anxious to see how this unfolds. It is hard to believe that Tony would work undercover again -- especially secretly so I am really curious to see what Vance said or did to convince him to do it and what happened to hurt Tony and shoot-up his vehicle. I find the implied relationship between Tony and Jack to be interesting -- can't wait to see what happens now that Tony is in Stillwater and what Gibbs will do or say when he finds out. Please write more soon --I am very impatient and find it hard to wait for more of a good story.
Date: 04/29/2009
Title: Chapter 8: 8 Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Love this so far. I think the father/son dynamic for Gibbs & Tony is very interesting. I don't get how Tony could be doing so much undercover and obviously getting ill without Gibbs noticing anything. I love that you are working all of the team into the story. I think NCIS has one of the best ensemble cast of characters and love to see them all interact -- for good or bad. The Doctor is an interesting addition. She sounds to be just Gibbs' type, but maybe he gets his taste from his father. There also seems to be a bit of interest between Tony and "Kate" too. Did you mention how old she is? Anyway, please write more soon!!!
Date: 05/09/2009
Title: Chapter 39: 39 Reviewer: FicFan Signed
I have been thoroughly captured by your story and can't wait for you to continue. As much as has been revealed there is so much more that is still unknown. I was not the least bit surprised that Vance and Tony's father were out to get Tony, but you caught me off guard with the Sec Nav's involvement -- I think I understand Eli David's involvement, but would like to hear it stated. This has been quite a roller coaster ride and I have hung on every bit of information as it has been revealed, but I have to say that it makes no sense at all that Dr. Marshall is on the Sec Nav's payroll as a "hitman". Why would she be in the small town of Stillwater? She would be placed somewhere in DC or the like so she would have access to more people that the Sec Nav would be associated with and might want eliminated. Even Gibbs did not know that Tony would head to Stillwater -- Vance and the Sec Nav were looking for him for days and did not know where he was until Tony called. Sorry, but that little bit makes no sense -- also Gibbs should have known not to leave Tony without protection -- the bad guys know where he is and there is an international contract on his life -- and Abby does not count. The rest is all quite intriguing and I hope you write more soon -- can't wait to find out what will happen next.
Date: 01/30/2010
Bunkmates by TaylorGibbs Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Gibbs has an interesting bunkmate
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 282 Read Count: 7600
Published: 05/27/2009 Updated: 05/27/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Bunkmates Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Hope you take this as the compliment that it is . . . the first word that came to mind as soon as I finished reading this is "C U T E"!!! It put a smile on my face after a long day at work. THANKS!!!
Date: 05/28/2009
Moving Forward by katherine Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 144]
Summary: Tony takes the position in Rota when Shepard offers it.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Alternate Universe
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112889 Read Count: 261800
Published: 11/14/2010 Updated: 10/30/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Teamwork Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Am really liking this story -- really like Tony's new team -- Tony getting hurt was a bit obvious, but it had to happen. I'm guessing Tony is going to find out that at least some of the team e-mailed him and he just didn't get them -- that is quite a twist. Hope you write more soon.
Date: 12/09/2010
Summary: Tony needed to talk to someone he could trust. He turned to someone a little unexpected.
Categories: Gen Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Jimmy Palmer, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character study, Drama, Episode Related, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: None
Warnings: Partner betrayal
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6866 Read Count: 26131
Published: 12/09/2010 Updated: 12/16/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Return to Stillwater Reviewer: FicFan Signed
I love reading about a relationship between Tony and Jackson. There are quite a few fanfics that show some connection, which is great, but I remember the episode they met and there seemed to be a connection even on the show -- I wish they would have followed up with that. It would have been interesting to see Tony getting along with Gibbs Father even when he was having to work so hard on his relationship. I hope you plan to write more -- can't wait to see what is going on and how Jackson can help.
Date: 12/09/2010
Title: Chapter 7: Tuesday--Part II Reviewer: FicFan Signed
I love the stories with Jackson and Tony as "family". I am glad to see some fics that bring up this episode. I thought they blew this incident off way to fast and easy. I wasn't thinking that Tim and Ziva should be fired, but there definitely should have been serious consequences and I certainly don't blame Tony for not trusting them. This was well written and I enjoyed it -- Thanks!
Date: 12/17/2010
Fired? by maan Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Vance finds out that Big D has been fired. Why? and will Tony loose two jobs in one day?
Categories: DiNozzo/Other Characters: Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: DiNozzo/OMC
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1259 Read Count: 3249
Published: 12/10/2010 Updated: 12/10/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fired? Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Really like the idea of Tony being a coach on the side. Like that Vance is being forced to see him in a new light. Is Eliot Spencer an Original Character, from NCIS or some other show? He doesn't sound familiar to me. I noticed this said it was Series : Value #3 -- I read #1, is there a #2? Anyway I really like what you have so far and look forward to more.
Date: 12/18/2010
Title: Chapter 1: Fired? Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Really like the idea of Tony being a coach on the side. Like that Vance is being forced to see him in a new light. Is Eliot Spencer an Original Character, from NCIS or some other show? He doesn't sound familiar to me. I noticed this said it was Series : Value #3 -- I read #1, is there a #2? Anyway I really like what you have so far and look forward to more.
Date: 12/18/2010
Old Friends by joblo Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Work was his life and as long as Tony was on his six, life was good. He'd vowed to have Tony's six too, but now Tony had secrets and there were friends Gibbs had never met or even heard of. It didn't take a genius to see that things were changing and Gibbs didn't like change.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo, DiNozzo/Other Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Angst
Pairing: None
Warnings: Kink, Multiple partners, Mpreg
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105801 Read Count: 132648
Published: 12/20/2010 Updated: 07/02/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Confrontations Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Got me curious -- have lots of questions -- looking to the coming chapters to answer them -- hope you update soon.
Date: 12/28/2010
Title: Chapter 3: Helping Out a Friend Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Not sure what I think of this -- hate to think of Tony so out of it he can't control his need for sex. Always interesting to find connections from different people -- it makes sense that Tony and Derek have met -- Spencer would be a bit more obscure. I understand going to Abby for help in finding information he needs, but I think it is irresponsible of Gibbs to involve McGee. This would be an extremely sensitive secret and one he should not risk getting out -- he promised to be discreet and within seconds is risking the secret getting out -- I'm disappointed with Gibbs.
Date: 12/30/2010
Ice Cold Fever by LoveMarines Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Set a little after 'Requiem'. How does Tony react to Gibbs endangering himself again without backup? He always planned to keep his feelings for his boss hidden, but maybe he should tell Gibbs. Tony/Gibbs.SLASH.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Episode Related, First Time, Friendship, Pre-slash, Romance, Series, UST
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13188 Read Count: 34107
Published: 03/21/2011 Updated: 05/14/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: FicFan Signed
The first chapter had me intrigued -- so glad to see an update. Please give us more soon -- can't wait to see what is going to happen. Thanks!!!
Date: 04/04/2011
Summary: Tony has the flu, and Gibbs can’t help feeling protective. Second in the President!Tony 'verse
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Kate Todd, Jimmy Palmer, Donald Mallard, Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Established relationship, Alternate Universe, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2536 Read Count: 7585
Published: 05/27/2011 Updated: 05/27/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: All The King’s Men: In Sickness and In Health Reviewer: FicFan Signed
The stories in this series are so short there is not much to comment on, but this is a unique idea. What I have read so far has been fun to read -- I like how you have integrated the different characters in their different roles and would really like to read more.
Date: 05/28/2011
Summary: Flirting has never gotten Tony DiNozzo into trouble. That is, until he met Alex Gibbs.
Categories: DiNozzo/Other Characters: Original character, Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Angst, Alternate Universe, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Pairing: DiNozzo/OMC
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12467 Read Count: 6164
Published: 06/05/2011 Updated: 06/23/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Interesting idea to have a brother for Gibbs. Makes for some interesting possiblities and effects on the dynamics between Gibbs and Tony. The physical relationship is pretty hot, but am really interested in how the day to day will work between Alex and Tony and with Gibbs.
Date: 06/24/2011
Graceless by WCUGirl Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The aftermath of events in Grace Period. The team reacts. Minor character death.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Jenny Shephard, Donald Mallard, Anthony DiNozzo, Abby Sciuto, Jimmy Palmer, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Paula Cassidy, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Episode Related, Established relationship, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo, DiNozzo/Other, Abby/McGee
Warnings: Violence, Death story
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3466 Read Count: 7923
Published: 06/22/2011 Updated: 06/22/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Graceless Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Really glad to see this--I always thought they kind of glossed over how this would have effected the team and especially Tony. The story is very sad, but also very touching. Thanks!
Date: 06/23/2011
Silver Knight by WCUGirl Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Tony's spent his life being abused. When the opportunity arises to walk away from that life, can he do it? Will Gibbs be able to save him? Angst, OOC, Abuse!!!!!!, Violence, Slash, and Language warnings.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Jimmy Palmer, Kate Todd, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Original character, Timothy McGee, Tom Morrow
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Pre-slash, Romance
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo, DiNozzo/OMC
Warnings: Dark story, Disturbing imaginery, Domestic abuse, Kink, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79346 Read Count: 213611
Published: 07/07/2011 Updated: 07/10/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Break Through Reviewer: FicFan Signed
Always thought Tony was more vulnerable than he shows to the world, but it is really difficult to see him so "beat down" and almost helpless. Part of me doesn't want to read anymore of this, but another part is looking forward to what I assume will be his recovery with the help of his new "family", especially Gibbs. It is well written -- thanks for sharing.
Date: 07/07/2011