Reviews by jackilee71
Summary: My take on a little missing scene from Season 5 opener. Tony, Gibbs friendship
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Genre: Episode Related, Friendship
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 770 Read Count: 2636
Published: 09/27/2007 Updated: 09/27/2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes It Helps Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Coming a little late to reading your story, obviously. But I love those nice little father/con moments Gibbs and Tony share in the basement. Well written.
Date: 10/26/2010
Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes It Helps Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Coming a little late to reading your story, obviously. But I love those nice little father/s on moments Gibbs and Tony share in the basement. Well written.
Date: 10/26/2010
Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes It Helps Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Obviously a late-comer to this story. Love the father/son moments Gibbs and Tony share in the basement. Very well written.
Date: 10/26/2010
A Cry for Help by ncismom Rated: R [Reviews - 42]
Summary: Tony's world is crashing around him but he doesn't believe his team can help him. He turns to someone unexpected for help, but will it be enough to save him?
Categories: Gen Characters: Timothy McGee, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Donald Mallard, Anthony DiNozzo, Abby Sciuto, Ziva David
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Drama, Character study, Angst
Pairing: None
Warnings: Dark story, Disturbing imaginery
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133551 Read Count: 64931
Published: 04/21/2009 Updated: 07/21/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 44: 44 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Pat, I realized a while back I never left you a comment about this story, and since I was a faithful reader, I thought I should. I am really glad you were able to get back into your account and finish the story first of all. I really like the way you ended it. Though personally I think you should have nailed Vance's ass to the wall. But I can understand why you didn't, for the kids. It was really thoughtful of Tony to think of Vance's kids growing up without a father. Let me know when you write more. I would love to read them. Jackie
Date: 09/13/2010
The Long Road Home by ncismom Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Gibbs' latest obsession with a case results in a tragic incident that will change Tony's life forever.
Categories: Gen Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Donald Mallard, Anthony DiNozzo, Abby Sciuto, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 84720 Read Count: 24449
Published: 08/31/2009 Updated: 07/08/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 23: 23 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I hope Gibbs makes it to the hospital in time. I agree Tony needs to know, and I admire Tim wanting to let him know before he hears rumors. But I am not sure Tony is in a position to handle it right now. I think Jenny is just being a b****. I too think she is holding the results of the undercover mission against Tony. All that said, LOVE the story. Keep It Coming!
Date: 01/28/2011
Title: Chapter 24: 24 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I hope Tony won't give up on his recovery. I really, really hope Jenny has something bigger and better for him and is not throwing him out like yesterday's garbage, not after what he did for her. LOVING the story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 03/09/2011
Title: Chapter 25: 25 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Can I expect a miracle here? Pleeeease!
Date: 06/11/2011
Silent Tears by ncismom Rated: R [Reviews - 13]
Summary: A secret from Tony's past is exposed by a man out for revenge. Will Gibbs and the team be able to save DiNozzo from losing everything important to him?
Categories: Gen Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Kate Todd, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee
Genre: Angst, Character study, Drama
Pairing: None
Warnings: Dark story, Disturbing imaginery, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77774 Read Count: 18558
Published: 09/11/2009 Updated: 04/04/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19: 19 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I'm loving this story. I love how you amp up the action and suspense. I will be not-so-patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 11/11/2010
Title: Chapter 21: 21 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I am glad Gibbs got to hear Sydney's voice too. That was a really nice effect, plus it gives Gibbs a little more insight into Tony's life and character. So, at least, Gibbs knows who Tony was talking to when Gibbs watched him on the video. Keep 'em coming. Waiting is torture, too. Update Soon!!!
Date: 01/29/2011
Title: Chapter 22: 22 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I'm glad you had Tony put an end to Miller, poetic justice. I love story, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 02/14/2011
Title: Chapter 23: 23 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
WOW! (tears) Very, Very sweet! The goodbyes to Sydney and Sean were heartbreaking. Thanks for the story. Can't wait for the ending!
Date: 04/01/2011
Title: Chapter 24: 24 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Great story! I hated that Sydney's parents wouldn't let Tony come to the grave. My heart ached for him. I am really, really glad you resolved that the way you did. Thanks again, loved the story.
Date: 04/06/2011
Heartbeats by wildskysong Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: How do you deal with the death of a teammate, the five stages of grief, an increasing caseload, and the possibility that you might be going crazy? As it turns out, you don't; it deals with you, and the only thing you can do is hold on.
Categories: Gen, Het Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Jimmy Palmer, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Action, Alternate Universe, Character study, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: None
Warnings: Death story, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5145 Read Count: 2824
Published: 05/16/2010 Updated: 07/10/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Heartbeats Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Kallie, GREAT STORY!! I'm with Gibbs, I hope it is a dream also. Can't wait for the next installment. I have some stories archived here too, if you would like to read them: Air and Water, Accountable, and Rest in Peace. I heart comments. Again, can't wait to read part 2. Jackie
Date: 05/16/2010
Summary: When Tony receives an embarrassing injury while McGee and Ziva should have been listening, how funny is it really? Alternate ending to “Dead Air”. Rated for language. This story contains Ziva and McGee bashing, (a little Vance bashing too) so if that’s not your thing don’t read this story. Please, no flames.
Categories: Gen Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Donald Mallard, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Angst, Drama, Episode Related, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: None
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17012 Read Count: 13706
Published: 01/06/2011 Updated: 01/14/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: An Embarrassing Injury Epilogue Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I really liked the story. I liked the ending. Nothing stays the same, even under the best circumstances. I am really glad Team DiNozzo is back on the mend.
Date: 01/15/2011
Title: Chapter 9: An Embarrassing Injury Epilogue Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Sorry, I meant to say 'Team Gibbs' in my previous comment.
Date: 01/17/2011
Second in Command by Arress Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Tag to “Dead Air”. Tony doesn’t trust his teammates to have his six any longer, and he doesn’t expect Gibbs to understand. One shot, no ships.
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Episode Related, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1435 Read Count: 3947
Published: 01/09/2011 Updated: 01/09/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Second in Command Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I love(cliff-hanger) and I hate (just tell me what Gibbs did to handle it. Don't leave me hanging.) the way you ended the story. Great Story by the way.
Date: 01/09/2011
Summary: Typing up the loose ends left in Gibbs Return.
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Jenny Shephard, Kate Todd, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Episode Related, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Series
Pairing: None
Warnings: Dark story, Disturbing imaginery, Domestic abuse, Partner betrayal, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2383 Read Count: 3405
Published: 01/15/2011 Updated: 01/15/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Part 2 Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Hey everybody! Thanks for reading this story. I have never left a message like this before with my own story, but I made several changes, both for editing purposes and clairification. If you have read the story before, and parts of it made no sense, please give it a second read. Hopefully my changes helped. Thanks for your support. Keep Reading!
Date: 01/16/2011
Summary: Tony gets bored when they have no cases. with surprising results.
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Drabble/Ficlet/Vignette
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 933 Read Count: 1759
Published: 03/14/2011 Updated: 03/14/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Tony's Bored Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
A bored Tony is a dangerous Tony. for sure. I can really see Tim's blow up, an accumulation of crap over the years. Great story.
Date: 03/16/2011
Summary: There is more to Tony DiNozzo than meets the eyes.
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Character study, Drabble/Ficlet/Vignette
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 343 Read Count: 2088
Published: 04/03/2011 Updated: 04/03/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Pomp and Circumstance Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I have always loved 'smart Tony' thanks for writing him that way.
Date: 04/06/2011
Summary: Some secrets are worth keeping. Tony finds out he has a daughter and, suddenly, the wrod 'family' takes on a whole new meaning.
Categories: Gen Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Friendship
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7533 Read Count: 3631
Published: 04/18/2011 Updated: 04/18/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: It's a Long Road (to Walk Alone) Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I really enjoyed the story. I knew Tony would make a great dad. I LOVED the way he protected Bianca at school and then when everybody was yelling down in autopsy. I just need more. I want to know if Tony put everybody in their places or not. I want to know if he told them the REAL reason he never told them about Bianca. I really, really hope you write a part two.
Date: 04/20/2011
The Probie by duderank Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: No clues. It just remains for the story to unfold.
Categories: Gen Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Other
Genre: Character study
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 493 Read Count: 849
Published: 09/28/2011 Updated: 09/28/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Probie Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Wow, you really ARE leaving us in the dark on this, but great start. Can't wait to see where the rest of 'Team Gibbs' is now.
Date: 10/02/2011
Poe: The Raven by anny385 Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A Murder is kind of like one of Poe's stories. 1st of my Poe Series.
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Case
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 950 Read Count: 848
Published: 10/30/2011 Updated: 10/30/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Poe: The Raven Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
I, too, am a fan of Poe. I love that you are using his works in your story. I think 'The Raven' is his best poem. I think 'The Tell-Tale Heart' is his best story, love how he builds the suspense. Good story, so far.
Date: 10/31/2011
Summary: A kidnapping of a Petty Officer like the Poe story The Premature Burial. 2nd in the Poe Series.
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Case
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 893 Read Count: 1018
Published: 10/30/2011 Updated: 10/30/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Poe: The Premature Burial Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Is this the end of the Poe series? I read in Poe's bio, (My eight grade teacher was obsessed with Poe. We basically had to KNOW his bio, word for word.) and I remember from that, that Poe had an obsession with death. He had a great fear of being buried alive. (Of course, they didn't embalm in those days.) Thanks for the story.
Date: 10/31/2011
Reassurance by BHP Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: During the seventh season episode "Faith", Gibbs rests a hand on Jackson's shoulder. From that single movement, this story.
Categories: Gen Characters: Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Genre: Character study, Episode Related, Friendship
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2872 Read Count: 1745
Published: 12/16/2011 Updated: 12/16/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Reassurance Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Very sweet, love the Leroy/Jackson talks.
Date: 12/18/2011
Stakeout by leoraine Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The team is out on stakeout. The only problem is, the house they're in might be haunted.
Categories: Gen Characters: Abby Sciuto, Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Timothy McGee, Ziva David
Genre: Humor
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2313 Read Count: 1300
Published: 03/11/2012 Updated: 03/11/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Stakeout Reviewer: jackilee71 Signed
Oh, come on!! Was this a murder house in Murderville...What?! Continue...I need more information.
Date: 03/18/2012