Reviews by Shron
FORCED TRAINING by ncisrules Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Gibbs is forced to train a very special slave.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, First Time
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: BDSM, Non-con
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91879 Read Count: 186075
Published: 06/01/2012 Updated: 06/14/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
Ok you have my attention, please don't leave me hanging.
Date: 06/02/2012
Title: Chapter 2: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
I agree I definitely want more, please...
Date: 06/02/2012
Title: Chapter 3: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
You have my attention even more.
Date: 06/03/2012
Title: Chapter 4: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
I want to know what's next.
Date: 06/03/2012
Title: Chapter 5: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
Gibbs and Tony always interesting. Tony is being mistreated and I'm connecting to his plight just like Ducky. I love Gibbs' reaction to Tony when he is exposed to him as well as his show of concern no matter how hard he tries to resist has obvious attraction to Tony.
Date: 06/03/2012
Title: Chapter 6: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
WOW!!! This is an incredibly intense story and I like intense a lot…please don’t leave me hanging too long.
Date: 06/03/2012
Title: Chapter 7: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
Tony never catches a break...but Gibbs wants him...and I guess that's a good thing under the circumstances.
Date: 06/04/2012
Title: Chapter 8: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
Each chapter is getting deeper and deeper into this extremely harsh world...that you are making almost too real but I can't stop reading. Good thing Gibbs has Tony’s back.
Date: 06/04/2012
Title: Chapter 9: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
This is a dark story and Tony's nightmare was heartbreaking, with him holding on to the nightmare only made it worse...openning up to Gibbs should help them both...can't wait for more.
Date: 06/06/2012
Title: Chapter 10: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
I told you I like intense and you don't disappoint each chapter makes me want more.
Date: 06/06/2012
Title: Chapter 11: FORCED TRAINING Reviewer: Shron Signed
"HOT SHOWER" then some revelations...Wow Gibbs is about to put Tony thru the same thing he went thru and Tony is looking right thru him to the core...Just Wow...Loved that very revealing chapter. (“That’s good, Marine, real good.” Walters took a step closer to Gibbs. He reached out and gripped Gibbs flaccid cock in his large, beefy hand and began a slow stroke. Gibbs only response was a sudden intake of breath. Leaning forward, Walters whispered in the gunny’s ear, “Now, shall we start your training?” Walters felt a shiver run through Gibbs. “By the time I’m through with you, you’ll be the best damn slave trainer here, I promise you.”) 'EYES WIDE OPEN'
Date: 06/07/2012
CONFESSIONS by ncisrules Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Gibbs lets a long kept secret slip while under the influence of a drug.
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Genre: Alternate Universe, First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3664 Read Count: 6922
Published: 06/03/2012 Updated: 06/03/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: CONFESSIONS Reviewer: Shron Signed
I agree you really know how to grab the reader's attention and hold on to the very end. I'm glad I didn't miss this one.
Date: 06/05/2012
FORCED CONTROL by ncisrules Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Gibbs and Tony start to settle into their new lives, but will Gibbs be able to keep his slave or will he lose control to someone else
Categories: Gibbs/DiNozzo Characters: Other, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Established relationship, Drama, Angst, Alternate Universe
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Warnings: Torture, Non-con, BDSM
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94597 Read Count: 187108
Published: 06/18/2012 Updated: 03/28/2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Great Start!!! You have a way of grabbing my attention. I'm dying to know how Tony handles the situation. And let’s not leave Gibbs out what will his reaction be. Gibbs should really listen to the very wise Ducky. Looking forward to the next chapter or two…hint…hint…Thanks for sharing.
Date: 06/19/2012
Title: Chapter 2: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Oh my God, that was hotter than Hell...Tony and Gibbs,Gibbs,Gibbs. Whew!
Date: 06/19/2012
Title: Chapter 3: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
ANOTHER GREAT ONE! I love this extremely sexy relationship between Tony and Gibbs. I love how they push each other’s doubts away. Cool twist looks like Papa DiNozzo is lurking in wings coming after are ‘boy’…thanks for posting…you always leave me want more.
Date: 06/21/2012
Title: Chapter 4: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Wow...that Anthony DiNozzo Senior is one evil SOB...no wonder Tony had a meltdown. Please don’t let him get his hands on Tony…Gibbs has to save him.
Date: 06/25/2012
Title: Chapter 5: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Oh my, that was an intense one...I really felt sorry for Tony, he’s so afraid of his father and what he’ll do. Tony will even hurt himself to both protect Gibbs and keep his father away. Gibbs has an important decision to make. Ducky’s wisdom is shining through again but what will Gibbs do…looking forward to more.
Date: 06/30/2012
Title: Chapter 6: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
That was just mean, have I ever mentioned how much I hate cliffhangers, LOL. Just hanging by a thin thread don’t let me fall, oh sh__!!!
Date: 07/04/2012
Title: Chapter 7: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Oh no, you’re trying to kill me…but I was warned…”Tony faces another crisis”…what an understatement. Tony’s father is blackmailing a corrupt scum cop into doing his dirty work and now he’s breaking down Gibbs’ door using police, Gibbs isn’t there and Tony is headed out the attic window dressed in nothing but sweatpants in a freaking thunderstorm to escape a faith worse than death…you have taken mean to a new level…I’m loving it. DON'T KEEP ME HANGING...GIVE UP THE NEXT CHAPTER...PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Date: 07/08/2012
Title: Chapter 8: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Wow!!! What a ‘RUSH’ That was a close call for Tony in more ways than I care to count. Poor Tony, guy can’t catch a break…and Gibbs loved the encounter with DiNozzo Sr.'s lackey...looking forward to more…soon I hope…fingers crossed
Date: 07/10/2012
Title: Chapter 9: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Wow!!! From pain and angst to life changing decisions…Tony and the team meeting to hot and sensuous love-making to a declaration of love…what a way to ‘rock’ a story and leave the reader wanting more. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 07/25/2012
Title: Chapter 10: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Now Tony has two snakes to deal with…please let him do the right thing and go straight to Gibbs. He’s been through enough, it time for DiNozzo Senior to get a major setback…please.
Date: 08/06/2012
Title: Chapter 13: FORCED CONTROL Reviewer: Shron Signed
Geez.This story is really messing with my emotions, talk about a roller coaster ride. What’s next?
Date: 10/10/2012
Summary:
Categories: Het Characters: Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Crossover
Pairing: DiNozzo/OFC
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9147 Read Count: 45755
Published: 07/06/2012 Updated: 08/16/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Shron Signed
All of your stories have some real potential but I need more to hold my attention...
Date: 07/07/2012
Summary:
Categories: Gen Characters: Anthony DiNozzo
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3612 Read Count: 6048
Published: 07/06/2012 Updated: 07/25/2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Angels of Mine Reviewer: Shron Signed
There's some real potential here but I need more like the other story.
Date: 07/07/2012